You have got some potential, and that chocalte rain part made me laugh.
If i where you, i would make a story instead of a very short compilation of short movies.
This flash would have got a 8 if it were longer, i know you said it was meant that way. But just try to have more content. 7/10
i voted 5 and higherd your score to a 3/5
this was pretty good but next time, try to make it longer...
i must say its an nice flash but..
crap music and wierd story line (i know where you want to go with it, and its a deformed look on society)
Other then that, its good.
Your score is the highest in all of newgrounds. This animation is freaking great, VERY well done
Ok this movie was smoothly animated, it has a nice twist and the music added much to the quality.
Your getting 9 stars becouse it was a bit to short.
So this was what u were working on ey? Its cool, but like you said: short
And that is also the single downside of it. *Thumbs up*
This movie(s) rocks, it keeps getting better and better.
Ill watch out for the 4th one :D
Thanks, that's exactly what I wanna' hear! :)
Not really good
Ok the things what were good:
Blood n Gore
Things to improve:
Try to make the movie longer
Pretty decent, but due the lack of sound and the shortness, it wasnt too good.
This movie is great and very funny!
I think this flash IS original and is also front page worth. Im going to make a constructive review for ya.
Graphix: A 7 becouse well, it mostly where pictures but not bad quality. Next time maybe better quality drawings and animation.
Style: This style is one of a kind, i liked it very much. Randomnes to the max ;). Not changes here.
Sound: and 8 becouse i liked the random japanese voices, maybe sync them some more to the animation .
Violence: 6 couse it mostly was humoristic violence (fire pigeon), maybe next time some more ;).
Interactivity: 0, couse it was a movie DUH.
Humor: 10 cose its true =0, really, your randomness is great.
Overall: 9 becouse this was a great movie.
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