You have got some potential, and that chocalte rain part made me laugh.
If i where you, i would make a story instead of a very short compilation of short movies.
This flash would have got a 8 if it were longer, i know you said it was meant that way. But just try to have more content. 7/10
i voted 5 and higherd your score to a 3/5
this was pretty good but next time, try to make it longer...
i must say its an nice flash but..
crap music and wierd story line (i know where you want to go with it, and its a deformed look on society)
Other then that, its good.
Sorry but it feels a bit empty. There really isnt that much to do.
Add more features and clean up the drawing. It IS the center of the whole flash so it cant look shaggy at some points.
Well im not flaming this becouse the fact i died after 30 days but it is related to that. Ive waisted 30 minutes only to die after my mouse fell out. This game is great but it misses one VERY important feature in this genre: Save games. I think its a shame becouse this game easily deserves a 10.
This was good animated but well, it seems you have rushed some part of it.
Now, i liked 9-12 of it and that does seem to say Something.
* nicely animated, knox's way :)
* nice variety of choice
* choice of music and sfx werent bad either.
Less good things-
* ok, fix the sound of the menu next time, its way to loud and the way its looping doesnt make my ears better (loud intro softer middle)
Overal = 8/10
Close to being good
Well the colouring is done top-notch, i must mention that before anything.
It does look like its missing some sort of structure to the body, its very off. Even cartoony characters have equal arms and legs. Then to the head, nice colouring again. But try to keep an eye on the details: like the brain and the shape of the head; It looks like he is tilting his head, but his eyes didnt move.
Nice work, keep improving
Awesome :) I see what you're getting at with the unequal arms. thank you, and I'll keep that in my mind when my damn tablet is fixed.
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